Mossberg's song

[Mossberg]

The tune of this song is kind of like "Lazy" By Bruno Mars (more like the part that says "I'll be loungin' on the couch just chillin' in my snuggie Flip to MTV so they can teach me how to Dougie 'Cause in my castle I'm the freakin' man" but not so jolly XD pretty much take out the back round music, I can't explain it well) but if you know me on skype I will happily send a video of me singing it asap. Please, in your reply, copy and paste what was there when you read it (copy and paste what I have so far, so I can know how much was there when you replied) And, like always, Be honest, but nice!
I don't have much time to work on it, so I well just edit in whatever else I get as soon as I get more.

She has a plastered on fake smile
hair running down her face
as she hears the water drip drop from her window pane
This girl felt like she was insane
But the window took her pain away
Put her in a better place
She feels like she was all alone in space
But no one can hear her cries
because they were coming from inside
Everyday she cried
people ask her if shes alright
she just lies and says "I'm fine"
This was all for society's benefit
Yea guess their words are venomous
~"I guess every world needs a disgrace
I'm mine for my world but
I don't even know if i'm in the right place
People laugh at my dreams
Say they're impossible"
People say this little girls words take it to the extremes
Though rarely she talks
She always had streams of tears on her cheeks~
Had huge mood swings when people made her eat
People would crush her dreams
But she still believed she would make it sky high
They would always deny
She goes in her room and cries
~"I guess every world needs a disgrace
I'm mine for my world but
I don't even know if i'm in the right place
People laugh at my dreams
Say they're impossible"
People say this little girls words take it to the extremes
Though rarely she talks
She always had streams of tears on her cheeks~